`Dear Miss Garland
Ask yourself, is this classroom happy? You’re probably gonna say “Yeah we’re pretty happy”, but ask yourself this; could this classroom be MORE happy?
The classroom is getting a bit lonely and we thought that we need something like a class pet to entertain us.We were thinking along the lines of a guinea pig. We chose this because guinea pigs are small and they are portable. Wouldn’t it be funny when it is on a spinning wheel, ohhh so cute! Another good reason we should have one is that they are not that expensive at ALL! They cost about $15 dollars.
And don’t you worry about the problems with a guinea pig, like: what if it poops on the floor? Well guinea pigs are small so we can keep them in a cage and put some newspapers or a tray in it for it’s droppings (free fertilizer!). What if it get’s lost you say? Well we can always put a bell on it if it hides somewhere in the class, so that’s those problem’s solved.
On the weekends, kid’s can have turns taking care of him/her. Think about the joy kid’s will have with a little tiny friend over the weekend. You could probably take it home on the holidays-wait, what about the guinea pig food? Well you’ll get your money’s worth when we’re selling those cute little furry guinea baby’s.
All you have to do is to buy him and we will take care of the rest… Classroom's are a lot happier with a pet, in fact, we will be so much happier that our learning will improve. Caring for a pet brings a sense of responsibility, kindness, and laughter. So Miss Garland, this is what the class is now. Can you look at that Guinea pig face and say no!
Cue the sad music.
Children go home sobbing in their bedrooms after school because we don't have a pet. The class is black and white but if you put a pet in the classroom it will become colourful.Miss garland, will you look into your big kind heart and get us a guinea pig. YOU MUST GET A GUINEA PIG YOU MUST GET A GUINEA PIG! *Cries in tears*
Oh and I won’t breathe until you get the class one do you want to kill one of your own students try sleeping at night knowing the fact that you didn’t buy a guinea pig. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *ghasp*
you must get us a class pet-please, I’m still not breathing! We know you're not a killer so go in and get a guinea pig for the class. *talks through mouth* By the way still not breathing....
Piece of advice, don’t buy a cat with it…
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